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I said several weeks ago that I would talk about some writing
techniques I learned of when I attended Sinister Creature Con back in October. Even
though this con emphasised special cinematic and make-up effects in the horror
genre, I picked up on three good tips there that can be useful in any media of
horror fiction including books, movies, TV and games. In fact, these tips can
be used in other genres besides horror. So doing the following can enhance your
fiction writing:
1 1) Determine
an end point to your piece. Fon Davis of Industrial Light and Magic, the
special effects company for the Star Wars
films, talked in his panel about doing this when he discussed his work on model
building and sculpting. He said that many special effects artists like to make
their work perfect by making it appear real to the last detail. That’s always
been my case when it comes to writing fiction (and so now you know why I run so
behind on my stories). But he said that, like painting, model building and
sculpting for special effects is a never-ending job because a piece can always
be improved. So the artist has to determine where to stop and basically say
when the piece is “complete”. This is especially the case in the film industry
where the producers want the work done by a deadline so they can release the
movie.
The same goes for writing fiction. Some authors
are pressured by contract with a publisher to determine their piece as “complete”.
Other authors, myself included, have to pressure ourselves to make such a
determination if we’re self-publishing our work. This is probably more
important for self-publishing authors than for traditional ones because no one is
around to tell us when we have to have the book done by. If we don’t determine
an end point to our work, we’ll never publish it and publishing for us will
always be a “someday it will happen”. So a great way to determine completion is
by getting a select group of people to read your work before submitting it for
publication. These readers can be your friends, a random audience (also known
as beta readers) or a critique group. Then after the readers give you their
comments, make the suggested revisions and then, as long as it sounds like it
might be acceptable enough to your audience, submit it for publication.
I have a critique group I attend regularly
and once they’ve critiqued my story, I’ll make the suggested revisions that
were most common among the group, and then I’ll go back and consider the lesser
common ones. After I make all revisions, I’ll do an additional reading or two
to myself, and keep my readers in mind while doing so. If the story looks like
it will convince my readers, and by that time in the final revision process it
normally does, I’ll declare the story complete. However, for my collection of
short stories, The Hidden, that’s coming up (hopefully by
the end of the year) I’m going to add one more additional step and that’s
releasing a beta version to certain readers. If anybody out there is interested
in being a beta reader then let me know in the box below.
2 2) Write a
story based on an illustration. Most people think that the script to a
movie comes before the promo poster and they’re almost always right in thinking
that. But interestingly enough, the director/screenwriter of 1986’s sci fi
horror-comedy flick, Terror Vision, did
it the other way around. He wrote the screenplay based on a poster that depicted
a monster crawling out of a television set. A lot of authors of fiction will do
this, especially ones who are visual artists too and make their own
illustrations.
I myself have never written any of my
fiction that way, although I wouldn’t mind trying it sometime. Normally I start
with a plot idea: a “what if” situation such as “what if people played VR games
via technological drugs?” That’s how I came up with my story, “Orbitville”
which I included in The Fool’s Illusion. Then I find some starting
point for that situation, which can be pretty tough. However, once I find it, I
write according to what I think my protagonist will do in response to that
situation and that’s when the story writing process becomes a journey for me.
But because it can be tough starting a
concrete scene from a premise or an idea that is more abstract, writing based
on an illustration may help. Just make sure you have the artist’s permission to
use the subject matter of the picture in your story if you decide to publish it.
If you develop the story from a movie’s promo poster or another author’s book
cover or such, double check the synopsis of the movie or book to make sure your
story doesn’t come too close in likeness to the plot and that it reflects your
own work so you don’t risk committing plagiarism.
3 3) Reference
real life events. I found out about this one from horror author Josh
Hancock who wrote the novel, The Girls ofOctober. The book is
about a young woman so obsessed with John Carpenter’s Halloween that the events in her own life begin to resemble those
of the movie, including murder. As far as references to real life go, the
story’s overall theme already refers to an actual movie. But the author also includes
passages from documents connected with the making of the film which in doing so
makes the novel even more believable.
Edgar Allen Poe did something similar with
his work by referencing both current events of his time and real life
philosophers. But similarly to developing a story from an artist’s
illustration, a person making reference to a real story, movie, TV series,
etc., in his/her own fiction should make sure they have permission from the
creator of the work they’re referencing, unless that work is in the public
domain.
Have you tried any of the above
tips for your own fiction? If so, did they improve your stories? Leave your
answers in the box below.
Until next time. . .
Those were good tips for writers.
ReplyDeleteAn artist is perfecting constantly. It's never finished. So we do have to stop and declare it done or we'll work on it forever. (I know I'm done working on a story when I start changing sentences back to the way they were in the firs draft. Then I know I've gone too far.)
I had an image in my head, based on a song, that inspired me to come up with my last release.
Congratulations on your upcoming short story collection!
Thanks, Alex. Speaking about "changing sentences back to the way they were in the first draft": I think I'm getting to that point in the short story I've been working on for a bit too long. lol I'm glad you brought that point up. Thanks.
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